I honestly think in terms of colour and style you've got it down, you clearly know what you're doing when it comes to art work and you know how to capture the fun which keeps your watchers watching, which is what you want. The only thing I can really point out is that I don't reckon Rainbow Dask is blue enough. But apart from that you've done really well, so well that I dont think it's worth knocking off a star for anything as that little thing I pointed out is indeed petty!
I LOVE the take you've done on Jagermeister, it really works and I think that's really really clever. Keep up the good art work, you've earned this fav and this watch from me good Sir! (or Madam)
I think the color scheme is very good. if I had ANY complaint it would be the ears. the are a tad to pointy. But besides that your art is very pretty. I should know, my art is WAY WAY WAY worse than this. I think that it's the the colors that just.......pop! I love all details in it like the background and spike. I like that RD and apple jack are competing (apple jack would win) And I say thank you friend for thinking up this great piece of art and thank you for this being my first critique.
Can't tell which part is funnier, Twilight trying to stop Spike from drinking (why did she even bring him if she was not going to allow him to drink anything?) or Fluttershy and Rarity's reaction to Flutter's gigantic drink
I see one pony ordering something twisted (I hope not pureed parasprite, but just a name, like Naked Parasprites on the Beach or something), one pony who ordered something she'd heard of but is now completely intimidated by (even her friend is shocked), and two ponies who are gonna be puking their guts out at the end of the evening, and will totally deserve it!
And Spike is just adorable. I'm sure Twi's given him small cups of beer before, but she's sensibly down on the thought of handing (the size equivalent of) a mug of whiskey to a dragon.
Pinkie wants a strong drink, Rarity is surprised at Fluttershy's drink, but she's to afraid to drink it, Rainbowdash and Applejack are starting a drinking competition, while Twilight is trying to keep Spike from drinking alcohol. Why'd they bring Spike anyways?