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Everything is Fine... by HavikM66 Everything is Fine... by HavikM66
:iconsmugtwilightplz::iconsaysplz:Yes, everything is going to be just fine:iconsaysendplz:

Ever since the season finale I've been concerned about the last line from Twilight. Why would they put so much emphasis on the situation like that? Why was the line repeated in the episode?
Well I had a thought, what if everything was not going to be just fine? That's when I thought of this...
Twilight still stuck at Sombra's magic doorway. She never left, Spike never saved the crystal empire, her friend's whereabouts unknown, and season 3 an illusion from the doorway.
But why would Sombra let Twilight see all the wonderful things in season 3 and even let her become a princess? The answer is simple. Sombra enjoys making ponies live their worst fears. In this season we saw a lot of progress in some of the other ponies lives. Rainbow Dash trained to be a wonderbolt, Scootaloo got a mentor, and even Trixie and Discord both came to the good side. Twilight may see something in that doorway that she would have never wanted to ever see, her friends growing up, going their separate ways, getting old, and Twilight having to leave her friends in order to do royal duties. Sombra can make this illusion as powerful as he wants, and if he gets bored, he can always crush her dreams...


If it's any consolation, I did feel bad when thinking about this and when I was drawing it...
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the detail is just beautiful,and the story and thoughfulness behind it is great. it gives a enormous depth of thought as you look into twilight's eyes,you feel like you are there.the emotion is portrayed so perfectly.
the artwork at the very first panel to the very last panel ranges in styles,and at the ease of which it happens you barely notice it the first time you read this.
her greatest fear happening right before her eyes plays out very nicely.
i may not be the best with words,but i can say this:
fabulous work my friend!
i hope to see more like this in the future!
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I.... I'm at a loss of words... This is probably the deepest... thing I've ever seen on this site!

Sombra gives her good dreams to let it play out for as long as it can until he decides to let it all break. And if he ever felt like it, he could simply wake her up and let her see what's become of everything, and there is nothing she could do to stop him.

This is everything about Sombra that I liked. The thought of what he did to the Crystal Ponies before and the possibilities of what he was going to do to everyone if he had won, put all that together with the very well thought out traps that he set up as the security system, with his most effective being that door, top it off with the fact that he had no motives other than to be evil and watch others suffer for his amusement, throw it into a blender and hit frapp'e, and you have the absolute most evil and dark that My Little Pony could ever have gotten!

In terms of the comic, it really hit me! I never would've thought of this! Do you realize how many doors for story writing this opens? A CRAP TON! By far the part that hit me the most was the second panel that showed Twilight just dreaming it all. It set the stage for the rest of it perfectly!
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Sret Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015
They could go to dark places with this villain. The only one who scared them all then not being there.
NasciEquine Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2015  Hobbyist
the concept.....CARAMEL FUDGE CAKES! the feels! nice bad end there, my friend!

Clapping Pony Icon - Complete Mane Six Clap  
It's a nice theory but it quickly falls apart when simply applying logic. Unless those "memories" are time compressed, if Twilight was truly just imagining everything from season 3 she would have starved to death in real life before getting to her "coronation."

And why would she be sad crying at the end? She's just become a princess in her mind. There's nothing upsetting there.

I like the picture, but the execution doesn't make sense to me.
Shadowlord123456 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
King Sombra: You've tasted their power Twilight Sparkle and when you get a taste of it there's no going back, all you want is more and more, take it from someone with experience it's slow road to where I am! That's where true evil begins, a few lies here, a little bad there, and suddenly it's all so easy!
LuvLuvDarkness Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. This is really good art, and a really interesting idea. Luv it :)
Cornisch Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Nice, even though it would have been better when the first image would have been the same style as well. But still:
Dowlphin Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, it's not very convincing since she's having an overall awesome life, but I know the general feeling that can conjure up ideas like this. That one time I took Salvia divinorum and later I wasn't sure whether the trip was over or whether I was still fully in it. Kinda shows you that there's no way to tell a perfect illusion from reality. And then the philososhit really hits the fan, haha. :D
Gosky3 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I never thought of this, but I have to admit, that line did make me think that hell was about to break loose. I mean, that's like the classic line, "What could possible go wrong?" :P
MLPFiMRox Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
I'm not much to ponies anymore, but do you hate Twilicorn? I'm just wondering. And why do you feel bad? I don't hate Twilicorn but I'm sure it's an anti-art. Proof: I saw :icontheanticorn65group:, a group I use to hate sooo much, but it's crreping and bothering me now even I'm closer to Minecraft right now.
HavikM66 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I personally don't hate twilicorn. This was just an idea that popped into my head at the time of the season ending. I personally like major twists like this in stories so I had to draw this comic as soon as I thought of it. After a while I noticed all the twilicorn hate and figured this still fit with it. While this image is part of their gallery I am actually not a member.
MLPFiMRox Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
Ok. Thanks for info.
Aburameclanhead Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Writer
Jester-Hellequin Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Wow what a mind f*ck I LOVE IT THANK YOU
twilightsparkle09012 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Anyway, GUYS!I Have awesome news..(if you did not like what you saw up there because it made you feel sad) I will try and make you happy!Guess what?They are ALREADY working on Season 5 of MLP:FiM!!!!!(happy dance) Also, the creators are on to something in season 4...I think you've noticed as we'll.Sit back and get comfortable.Grandmas gonna tell you a story.
The first two episodes of Season 4, Princess Twilight Sparkle part 1-2, the Harmony tree glows a light, and that light has six colors.The colors of the Mane Sixs' coats.My theory is it represents magic of friendship.Well, in Rarity takes Manehatten, at the end when Coco Pommel gave Rarity rainbow colored string, she put it on a shelf with other strings- the color of the Mane Six's coats.Then on the Rainbow colored one from Coco, well, that one glows the same glow the Harmony Tree glowed.And when Rarity was at the Fashion Show, and she saw her FRIENDS weren't there, the SAME glow appeared on the suspension rope in front of the chairs.Then Rarity had the SAME glow in her eyes.See?And in today's episode, Rainbow Falls, when Rainbow was "injured" in the hospital, and she looked at the flag on the floor, which Fluttershy, BullBisep, and Derpy (she IS in season 4) leave there.The light comes in from the window, with the SAME GLOW, and it guides it's way to the flag, making it GLOW.Then like Rarity, Rainbow eyes GLOW WITH THE SAME GLOW.Then at the end when Rainbow is writing in the journal, she leaves her medal hanging on the table, then goes plays with her friends.Then her medal glows the same GLOW!Now that I think about it, the GLOW could mean the ponies staying true to friendship, or them representing the elements of harmony, then they won't need the element gems, because the harmony will be within them! I just thought of that.Dang, this is long...
VioletFlare Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Actually, I think everyone figured it out before you...
twilightsparkle09012 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This was way long ago. : P
Now, there is sooooo much more!!!^.^
timstro59 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2014
My brain just exploded. I blame you and you're cleaning my ceiling.
GigaRonin Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013
This reminds me of Aizen and Ichigo in Bleach.

Aizen: "Since the beginning, all the battles you fought up till now, were all part of my plan."
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Stinkfly3 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
NOPE! Too tragic!
6XShadowX6 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
I like this version better.
MonkeyDZyrax Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013
Imagine of he kept her their for five decades only to wake her up and tell her that shes been living a lie.

Sombra you glorious bastard
ChelaAventurera Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Rend-Darkwolf Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2013
I seriously want this to be how season 4 starts. 
AndytheB-Artist Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist
Since Magical Mystery Cure was intended to be the first of a three part episode, I guess we'll find out when Season 4 rolls around.

As for this, if this were true, this would be a cop out on the level of Bobby Ewing reappearing in the shower (which happened during the premier of season 10 of Dallas).  You're saying that 11 Friendship is Magic episodes never happened and they weren't that bad episodes.  I doubt King Sombra would be THAT tricky.
BreakinBenny Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Student Filmographer
This is precisely how I feel about Friendship is Magic, ever since Lauren Faust left because Hasbro's a dick for a company.
mrredexorcist Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Quit making my head explod
SammyW28 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
Sounds like the MLP version of the "Dallas" Shower Scene...
DarkCrusader28 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013
If this was true Sombra would be the greatest magnificent bastard of all history.
DeadlockAt Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
good story line man or girl didnt expect that turn of events
VriskaKick Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
tl;dr: Sombra's a dick.

Feelsy comic though.
ScourgeXEveryoneOTP Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Your icon! Genocider Shou~
the best serial killer since ever
Luckysweep Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013
kniznik Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
While this would make an awesome part of season 4, I just don't see it happening. Despite how popular this show is with adults. It's still geared towards little girl's who dream of being princesses. Awesome comic strip still
Ajax94 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
Wow didn't see that one coming!
PhysicistEarthPony Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
You have a very similar way of thinking to how I think of things.
Zakgeki Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
TheDemonOfSloth Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I'd never thought of that.. holy crap this comic is COOL!
Westfallen Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
This woulda been the BEST way to end the season, just saiyan.
Wilson8787 Featured By Owner May 12, 2013
This is just...holy crap my mind has been blown.
Berrynitas Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
holy...shit that would be a perfect ending
DeustisOfShadows Featured By Owner May 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:icongeorgecarlinplz::iconsaysplz: BULLSHIT!! Nobody's "fiiiiiiiiiiiiine!"
Necromagenvion Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
Sombra is like, the greatest sadist, the ultimate torturer that has ever lived. He knows his mind cannot be satisfied if he doesn't deliver pain after pain after pain to anyone he could encounter. It's like a colossal pleasure for him.
ThetaNigma Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2013
I always thought its meant to foreshadow S4 opening big bad.
Silnev Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013
This revelation if true would PISS OFF ALL THE BRONIES WHO HAVE BEEN GIVEN SHIT BECAUSE THEY LIKE ALICORN TWILIGHT.....And I pray to god that this is what happens so I can go and bitch slap them a few times.
Komatsuzaki-Xingqi Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
derpydozens Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student General Artist
king sombra plushie and bb-gun. end of my anger issues
derpydozens Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Student General Artist
king sombra is a petty son of a bitch
CommanderEX Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
I know that 2 or 3 part episode always have villain in it, but making all of season 3 a cruel dream, and making Twilight Unicorn again would have a very negative impact on the show, also making Celestia proud was Twilight biggest dream, and since it is friends what helped her turn into Alicorn, Twilight would not be separated from them.
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